Wesley’s school assignment:
The following story is REALLY boring! Rewrite it on the lines beneath. Use adjectives to make the story more descriptive and interesting.
“The boy went to the fair. He met a friend. They ate popcorn. They went to a rodeo. They played games. The boy was tired. He went to his house. He got in his bed. He slept.”
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And Wesley’s rendition:
A boy from Spain went to the fair. He met a good friend. They ate jumping popcorn. It made them sick. Then they went to a crazy rodeo. They played games. The boy was hot and tired. He went to his broken down house. He jumped in his bed and slept for two years. The End.